The Untitled Song
This song is pretty upbeat, I'll try and record it some time soon. No name, and I wrote it a few days (maybe weeks) ago, just writing whatever came out. Leave me a comment, and tell me what you think about it.
I see your face, inside the crowd.
Humbling away.
Are you here to stay?
Come with me, on this twisted path.
We walk today, and we stop tomorrow.
Temporary souls, feelin' lonely.
Holding on, to the one and only.
Find the time, for you and I.
Singin' the songs, that we used to know.
Open wide, let me see inside,
the girl I used to know.
I see it in your eyes, the letters in disguise.
When - you will show.
I know you well, and you seem to tell.
Your secrets too fast, caught in this hell.
Let me know, and I will show -
You, who you really are.
You're so special, and so lovable.
More beautiful than the stars.
I see your face, inside the crowd.
Humbling away.
Are you here to stay?
Come with me, on this twisted path.
We walk today, and we stop tomorrow.
Temporary souls, feelin' lonely.
Holding on, to the one and only.
Find the time, for you and I.
Singin' the songs, that we used to know.
Open wide, let me see inside,
the girl I used to know.
I see it in your eyes, the letters in disguise.
When - you will show.
I know you well, and you seem to tell.
Your secrets too fast, caught in this hell.
Let me know, and I will show -
You, who you really are.
You're so special, and so lovable.
More beautiful than the stars.
Uh yeah, dude. That is pretty much awesome. I totally can't wait to hear it recorded xD
It deserves a really cool name.
And yeah. I like that. A lot.
Did I say I liked it?
Name it if you feel the need.
Why do you like it?
I am not worthy to name it. Altho "Temporary Souls" is like...the most awesome line in that song. And it is catchy.
and I like it because it has a lot of really beautiful metaphors. And it is the kind of song I wish someone would write for me xD
(because I'm a romantic weirdo and think it would be cool to have a significant other who writes you songs)
Well for one, I am sure you are worthy to name it whatever you want. :).
And thank you, and if I play it for you some time, I am sure it will be even more catchy \:D/.
Also; Who says it's not about you? Gotta go and assume all kinds of stuff, don't you?
I am bad at naming things :<
Yay \:D/
Uh. Was I wrong in assuming it wasn't for me? But you won't answer that, I'm sure. *glare*
I didn't ask if you were bad at naming things, I just said name it.
Maybe you were, maybe you weren't. What do you think?
Well if you ask me, I think 'Temporary Souls' would be a good name for it. But then again..you don't have to ask me.
And idk if I was or not...I'm not the one who wrote the song.
Don't go all Jewish on me and keep answering with questions >:1
Sounds like a good name for it.
You may not have written the song, but you can still have an opinion on it no? And what is that opinion?
:).
True. And I dare not say. I will keep my theories on it to myself.
And.
COMMENT WHORE. >:1
I believe you have already spoken your opinion, haven't you?
So why wouldn't you want to speak it again?
And maybe I am what you say I am, am I?
I refuse to honour you with a reply.
Why? You are allowed to answer in the other window, you know that right?